Gems of the project:
1) there was lots of personality, from emotions to anecdotes.
2) journal entries had humor throughout them
Oops, could have been better:
1) entries didn't appear proofread - lots of errors
2) no pictures or lists, just texttexttext.
What I'm going to borrow:
1) more description about my interactions with other people
2) metaphors made reading more fun!
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